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Wrong feet are wrong. XD

Best thing I've drawn to date. <3 Feel free to tell me how to fix my errors in the anatomy.

Background - some kind of battle, Portan kicks your ass and then scowls at you, cus she's like that. XD She probably hates you as well, she hates most people, but she's loyal to those that she doesn't.

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No. The title isn't an error. She's the King of Pain. XD

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I like this. The motion of it is very good, not to mention the commanding way that she holds her head high.

There are two ways that I can think of to 'improve' the look of the leg on the far side of us. First, sligtly shrink at particular leg so that it looks 'farther away' from the viewer (perspective!). Second, you could slightly change the angle of the calf muscle. Since the backside is turned toward us slightly then the back of the far calf should be facing us a bit more instead of being seen from the side. I hope I can explain myself... I think I sound convoluted.
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I think the motion is why I like it so much. :3 It's something hard for me to do, a lot of my figures look very stiff and unnatural. XD

Thank you for the advice, I see what you mean about the perspective, it's something I need to work on, legs inparticular suffer this. XD I've changed a few minor things, but I've cracked on and inked this one all ready...but your tips are useful and appreciated, thank you. :3 <3

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